Dylan the draft story board, works in the sense that it tells a story but is rushed, there are a number of shortcuts being taken wrt simply copying previous shots. There is a need for you to use the screen time throughout the scenes and to add further details to the story board wrt to the background elements... There is no accompanying lyrics linked to the storyboard so there is no sense of connection with the song... please use the provided template layout and include a shorthand for the shot type used / camerawork
Dylan the draft story board, works in the sense that it tells a story but is rushed, there are a number of shortcuts being taken wrt simply copying previous shots. There is a need for you to use the screen time throughout the scenes and to add further details to the story board wrt to the background elements... There is no accompanying lyrics linked to the storyboard so there is no sense of connection with the song... please use the provided template layout and include a shorthand for the shot type used / camerawork
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