The pitch makes sense as a parody of the Police using intertextual links to films. There are however several spelling and grammatical errors which need to be addressed and where you have discussed the issue of intertextuality in the lyrics you might also add a further slide showing how the film links to specific films set in the 70's and thereafter e.g. Hill Street Blues, The Sweeney, Starsky and Hutch. Please review the text for spelling and grammar and review wording ridiculousy???
The pitch makes sense as a parody of the Police using intertextual links to films. There are however several spelling and grammatical errors which need to be addressed and where you have discussed the issue of intertextuality in the lyrics you might also add a further slide showing how the film links to specific films set in the 70's and thereafter e.g. Hill Street Blues, The Sweeney, Starsky and Hutch. Please review the text for spelling and grammar and review wording ridiculousy???
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